You e-mail me your query letter, I read it, and I spend up to thirty minutes on the phone with you providing verbal feedback on how to improve it. If we finish in less than thirty minutes, we bank the remaining time for another day. We’ll schedule the phone call within 30 days of my receipt of the signed consultation agreement and the full fee.
 
Note: I do not provide written feedback on query letter critiques. If you desire written feedback on your query letter, I recommend you opt for a proposal critique.
 
Query Letter Critique Fee: $75
 
To schedule a query letter critique, please do the following:
 
1. Go to the Categories page to determine if I work with your kind of writing: Categories
2. If I do, visit the FAQ page, as the answers to some of your questions may already be there: FAQ
3. E-mail me the information requested below at: marcelalandres@yahoo.com. Be sure to put “Query Letter Critique Request” in the subject line. After I receive your responses, I will e-mail you the consultation agreement for signature.
 
Name:
E-mail:
Home mailing address:
Phone number at which I should call you for the consultation:
What is the title of your work?:
What is the nature of your work (e.g. self-help, cookbook, business, etc.)?:
If your work is fiction, what kind is it (fantasy, science fiction, literary, etc.)?:
Is it for adults, young adults, or children?:
Is the query letter written in English or Spanish?:
What is the name of the person who told you about me? If you weren't referred to me, how did you find out about my services?:
“As I am a ‘newbie’ to the business of writing and publishing, Marcela was able to break down the process in a way that I could clearly understand. Make sure she tells you the story about the two plumbers! Although success will not come overnight, I feel I have acquired a knowledgeable guide to direct me through the jungle to the mountain top.”--Steve Tanner, photographer/fine artisthttp://www.tannermark.com/hntestimonials.htmlshapeimage_2_link_0